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I have three short essays I wrote and submitted for grading. The teacher gave feedback for each one and I need those edits and revisions made to all three essays. I have attached the original essays and the feedback for each one.

PLEASE MAKE SURE TO HIGHLIGHT IN YELLOW THE ADDITIONS AND CHANGES MADE TO EACH ESSAY OR HE WILL NOT GRADE THEM

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