discussion post revising and refining
Conduct a self-analysis of a portion of your essay. In your initial post
(due Wednesday or earlier), copy and paste the paragraph of your
Rhetorical Analysis essay that describes your chosen advertisement.
After you have posted the paragraph, explain how you might revise
specific sentences to include more vivid details. Remember, the goal of
this very important paragraph is to provide a picture in words to your
reading audience. Write as though your reader cannot see the ad, and
must rely solely on your description to understand it.