this is advocacy project write solution essay for hcp based on research complete the introduction and topic sentences
My HCP main point:
problem is the fewer job opportunity for African Americans
cause1 is mass incarceration
cause2 is lower education level for Afri-Americans
The intro:
Provide a thesis statement at the end of the introduction that argues why this policy/solution is the best solution to the problem. Include as many analytical frameworks as you can: causation, cost/benefit, feasibility, comprehensiveness.
Thesis generator:
- The main idea you’re defending.
- Your first strongest argument.
- Your second strongest argument.
- The main counterargument to your position.
Body paragraphs:
first part — solution 1: National H.I.R.E, help the former offenders to find jobs. Can solve cause1.
second part — find solution 2 corresponding to my cause 2.
You are arguing for legislation currently in process (NOT PASSED), community interventions established and advocated for by credible non profit groups, and other courses of action that you did not think up on your own
For each part,
The Big 6 Paragraph Anchors
Every Topic Sentence (TS) Should Have One of These:
- 1) Cause:
This intervention is ideal at this time because it counteracts X cause of the problem by doing Y and Z.
- 2) Cost/Benefit:
Even though the proposed course of action will cost X due to Y, the amount of savings generated because of Z justifies the initial cost and establishes long-term profitability.
OR IF YOU CANT ARGUE FOR SAVINGS
Even though the proposed course of action will cost X due to Y, Z is a ready source of funding that will facilitate the implementation of this intervention.
- 3) Failed Solution:
Solution X failed because of Y, and this course of action avoids Y by doing Z instead, thus making it an ideal course of action at this time.
4) Opposition:
X group/person opposes the solution, but their opposition is unreasonable and flawed because of Y.
- 5) Prevention:
This intervention helps prevent the problem by doing Y and Z, and thus is an ideal course of action because it is not only reactive but proactive in establishing the means to eradicate the problem before it starts.
- 6) Feasibility
the order of that list is arbitrary
DO NOT have to have one of each type of paragraph